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An Angel and a Dove by ~1n3v1t4bl3:icon1n3v1t4bl3:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Free & Blank Verse


Of white,

Brilliant arching wings,

Grooving to the movement of the wind,

Black eyes beaming with gold,

Refined to heavenly perfection,

Epitome of beauty,

And then metamorphosis;

Creation within creation,

Piece by piece and feather by feather,

Increasing splendour,

A woman born of a dove,

Pink lipped and fair skinned,

Hanging brown hair,

A halo lingers around her pupil,

While the colour of iris remains fickle

Eyebrows curve in subtle excellence,

Newborn wings sprout from her shoulders,

White dress wrapped gently around her,

Coiled around her arms like the waves of a creek,

Her skin alight with radiating divinity.

Cheeks swell with joviality,

The involuntary smile,

Earth shifts and changes,

As she had once done,

Savouring the feel of her happiness,

For it was an honour to see an angel smile,

People changed their ways,

All appreciated,

For she was the most exceptional woman,

And none could compare,

To the fair glowing angel,

To the admirable pacifist who was once a dove,

Who changed for the better,

Who changed for love.
©2009-2010 ~1n3v1t4bl3
:icon1n3v1t4bl3:

Author's Comments

For my beloved bestfriend's birthday, I do not want her to forget me knowing I will never forget her. She is one of the greatest friends anyone could ever ask for, and sometimes I think I don't deserve a friend like her. Happy birthday Brittany, you make me smile. =)
I wish I did not have to leave, I want to stay here with you and talk to you longer. I will be back, I promise you; I can't leave one of my best friends behind like that, and I wish you a wonderful birthday.

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Jess says:
*Happy birthday, Britt
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` jessicatingskov <3 says:
*HAPPY BIRTHDAY BRITT!! =D YOU ARE MY BEST BEST BEST FRIEND EVER!
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Haley says:
*HAPPY BIRTHDAY BRITT
*^_^
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(22:32:14) PaintedLeaf: Happy birthday, Britt.
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Shortcut: HAPPY BIRTHDAY BRITT
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Missi: HAPPY BDAY BRITTANY
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Shortcut: HAY HAY BRITTANAY
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Shortcut: HAPPY BURTHDAY
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(22:36:53) Adjustment: Happy Birthday Britt.
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(22:39:58) Remember: Happy Birthday Britt (:
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(22:47:31) Chiy: HAPPY BIRTHDAY BRITT!
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(22:48:58) Jaredsgo: Happy Birthday Britt
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(23:23:49) Kyorrik: Happy birthday britt.
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(23:39:36) Zahaila: I wish you a wonderful birthday, britt! =D O6.25.O9 love - Zahaila

Comments


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~MoonlightVeil Jul 16, 2009, 8:49:40 AM
*kicks her old name*

Still my favorite! :blowkiss:
:iconomgitsjinxie:
Mood: Longing ~omgitsjinxie Jun 26, 2009, 12:17:11 AM
Love ya *hugs* Thanks so much. You're amazing. <33
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~1n3v1t4bl3 Jun 26, 2009, 12:21:58 AM
No problem, it's not perfect enough, but it's close! - hugs.
Love you, too. You're a kickin' BFFL, eh? =D
:iconomgitsjinxie:
Mood: Pride ~omgitsjinxie Jun 26, 2009, 12:25:33 AM
It's perfect to me. ^-^ Ha... I try but I don't know how well I succeed. :licking:
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~1n3v1t4bl3 Jun 26, 2009, 12:27:51 AM
You don't succeed, you exceed. So. =D
:iconomgitsjinxie:
~omgitsjinxie Jun 26, 2009, 12:29:23 AM
Nice word play. :clap:

Yay, then! :aww:
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~Carley-Chan Jun 24, 2009, 11:30:10 PM
HAPPY BIRTHDAY :D

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OTL

...I DON'T KNOW WHAT OTL MEANS BUT I JUST OTL'D.

<3~
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~Boingg-x Jun 24, 2009, 11:14:56 PM
HAPPY B-DAY YOU SOUND COOL SO HAVE A GOOD ONE

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Jena+Lex
:iconbrickstin:
Mood: Joy ~Brickstin Jun 24, 2009, 10:54:12 PM
Add me Sweetie and Happy birthday dear...


Look for a PM from me in a few.. *Hugs* laters :)

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Brickstin
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